Monday, March 4, 2013

Fiafia paragraphs

April the 18th is a date that must not be missed. Why? because on that day, Fiafia will be held in the school hall. It will have all kids from rooms 1-22 dancing, doing cultural things, doing acts, and even unicycling!

We are all practising hard, really, really, really hard. This is because on the 18th of April everyone in rooms 1-22 will be participating in Fiafia. This will be the biggest event in the whole of G.I!! Put the date in your diary now!

Fiafia, which is on April 18th, is the biggest event in G.I. There will be a whole lot of events ranging from unicycling, cultural events, and very cool acts. That day is important, so be there!

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1 comment:

  1. It's good but your basically just repeating yourself in every paragraph. In each paragraph,i kept on seeing you mention you guys were doing cultural acts, performing, dancing and even unicycling.So it was fine but you could have gone into better detail.
    Keep blogging
    Sincerly yours
    Mariam :D

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