Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Mitch Jane Mouse

This story is about M.J.M (Mitch Jane Mouse) and his brother N.J.M (Notch Jane Mouse) who aren't really a big help, until the city cheese gets lost and it is up to 2 little mice....


M.J.M was legendary. He was the only mouse that has a black suit. Other than that, he was the same as everyone else. His Boss, Ryan Gayla LeRat had a great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great grandfather, Nigel Gayla LeRat, and he found the great cheese of the universe. The cheese was like a diamond.



But then Mitch lost the cheese. He was playing with his computer and sent a bomb to this unknown planet. The next day the cheese was gone. Rare. “If not found,” Ryan said, “Then mouse city will never exist. That cheese keeps the city from falling apart. Oh yeah Mitch, for losing the cheese you will have to go after it.” “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” Mitch screamed in a high pitch voice.


“Lost Cheese Of The Universe: Found” said the computer. “Where?!” Mitch barked. “Planet C-13” “I mean, what galaxy” “The Great Attractor” “Seriously. The biggest galaxy in the universe, plus, it’s the most dangerous too. Eating other Galaxies. Can I at least get a cheese milkshake?” “No” “Why you little!---” Mitch’s brother Notch, took him to the nearest space shuttle, and off they went.

In the spacecraft, Notch played Minecraft*. “Can you do anything to help me?” “Nah” “Come on!” Then, they heard Ryan say “Ignition!” FWOOMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The spacecraft went. Flying out the galaxy, Mitch and Notch were fighting. “I get to play!” The spacecraft went so fast that Mitch’s seat ripped off. 2 seconds later, There was a BANG! “Uhhhhhhhhhhhhh” Mitch said. ”Hey!” Notch yelled. Mitch looked up. Zombies with ray guns had abducted Notch. “Yay!” Mitch yelled now I can---” BANG! The shuttle crashed on a planet. “What planet is this computer?” “C-16” ”NOOOO!!!!!” Mitch yelled.

800.978 days later, Mitch had finally found the planet after finding 39,969,783,824 other planets. “Yay!” He yelled. “On my first try!” He got out with his ray gun and grenades. “ ‘Sup” He said to a zombie. Then, the zombie ran at Mitch. “Aaarrrggghhh!!!!!!!” Mitch yelled while running for his life.  Mitch saw a cliff up ahead. He jumped. He made it.

The zombie wasn’t so lucky. It fell all the way to the bottom. Mitch then saw more zombies chasing after him. “I hate this place.” He grumbled. He looked back at the cliff and saw a tube on the other side. “And look!” He said. Now I have to go BACK again to get there.” He jumped and made it again. “I think I’m not dying because I’m so awesome!” He boasted. He kept crawling but the pipe got smaller and smaller. Soon mitch was stuck. “I jinxed myself.” He murmured.

Meanwhile mouse city had approximately 187 earthquakes, and the city was cracking into pieces. Everyone was running around, trying to find out where Mitch and Notch where. Ryan was trying to contact Notch. “Notch,” he said, hoping for a reply. “Can you read me?” All Ryan heard was from a zombie that picked up his speaker. “[]{}~Ж¶¿” the zombie replied. “Notch,” Ryan said, “I’m proud of you! Learning uhh, umm, ZOMBIE LANGAUGE!??! This is a zombie, isn’t it?” Ryan knew that hope of finding the cheese was gone.

But it wasn’t. Mitch crawled all the way out of the pipe. “Alright,” Mitch said, “I may be standing in my underwear, but mouse city needs the cheeeeese.” Notch was fighting the zombies. “Oh hey Mitch!” he yelled. “The zombies took me here and I’ve been fighting them ever since! Ummm, why are you in your underwear?” “It’s a LONG, LONG, LONG, LONG,LONG, STORY.” Mitch said. “Hey! where have the zombies gone?”

All of a sudden, the whole place started shaking. A zombie the size of the Empire State Building stomped in.”Ж{}¿~[]¶!” It said. Almost immediately Mitch pulled out his ray gun and shot. He missed. “Well done Al Capone!” Notch said. “I’m not Al Capone!” Mitch screamed. Notch replied, “I was sarcastic!”

With no more bullets, Mitch and Notch could only run for their lives. “Where do we go!?” Notch screamed. Mitch’s face lit up. “To that pipe thingy that I went through!” He yelled. The zombie could not fit inside the pipe. Mitch had finally done something to help. Notch got out of the pipe and saw a ladder. He climbed up it and then he saw the spacecraft.

“C’mon Mitch!” Notch yelled. He didn’t know where he was. Then, the pipe came flying in the air and landed in front of Notch. “Mitch?” Notch asked. “Are you in there?” He got out his chainsaw and started hacking the pipe.

1 hour later Mitch got out of the pipe. Before Mitch could say anything the zombie came right up behind him. “RUN!!!!” Notch squealed. They ran as fast as they could to the spacecraft. Once they were in Notch got everything going. They flew off.

From then on it was an intergalactic high speed chase. The zombies were catching up to the mice. “Wait a minute!” Mitch said. “If the cheese is like a diamond, why don’t we use it to blind the zombies?” “That’s worth a try!” Notch answered.

Their plan didn’t work. When they got to where Mouse city usually is, they saw pieces of rock holding together. When the got there, Ryan was a nervous swat. “Hey Ryan!” Notch and Mitch yelled. “We’ve got the cheese!” Mitch chucked it on the center piece. All the cracks faded away.

But their problems weren't over yet. The zombie came closer and closer to them. Mitch threw a can at the zombie. Then a bowling pin. Then a bowling ball. And when there was nothing else to throw, he tore off a bit of the cheese and threw it into the zombie’s mouth.

The zombie gulped it down, and then shrunk. The zombie was getting smaller because the cheese pulls things together. 2 hours of shrinking later, the zombie was the size of an electron. Everyone was glad that Mouse city was safe. Later that day Notch and Mitch got their prizes. Notch got a full edition X-box with all the popular video games, and Mitch’s reward was a cheese milkshake and the chance to play Minecraft.

“Oh yeah!” Mitch said. Now time to get my hands on that computer.......”

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