Friday, November 1, 2013

Minecraft

Our WALT is to show not tell in our sentences.

Managing to outrun the bloodthirsty scavengers, I knew that this wouldn't be my end. Out of nowhere, a green and white monster with no arms popped up. It started to bulge like a balloon. I was worried. “Oh shoo---” BANG! All of a sudden the whole screen goes red. On the lower part of my piece of technology, I saw ‘Super_SuperGoku was blown up by creeper.’

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